I Burn For You. (But You’re Someone Else’s Light)

[baekyeolexchange]

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt #: 038
Title: I Burn For You. (But You’re Someone Else’s Light)
Word Counts: 24k~
Side Pairing(s): sulay, taohun, kaisoo
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): rough sex, minor violence, angst, infidelity (kinda), blowjobs, sexual encounters, cursing, slight mentions of abusive relationship
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this fictional work. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Fire Man meets Light Boy, but love stories are never that simple. Mistakes and blurry lines make things hard, but it makes the painting of life so much more beautiful in the end.
Author's Note: Holy Cow! This ended up so much longer than I ever intended it to be! I hope people read it anyway >.< I worked really hard on this, and these characters are my babies. I hope everyone enjoys my story, and please don’t hurt me because of all the angst~ Also to the person who prompted this, I had to change the wording a bit to fit the story, I hope you like it!


(I Burn For You. (But You’re Someone Else’s Light))

Comments

[abcdefghiluvyou.livejournal.com]

Spot.

(Idk when I can read this, but I'll deffenitely come back to this! Thank you for choosing my prompt ;; )

[abcdefghiluvyou.livejournal.com]

okay, omg. i had to read this twice, because i had to stop reading the first time (a lot of real life came up)
and then i was totally lost and started again.

DAMN PRETTY SMOOTH the way chanbaek meet lmao. Baekhyun was such a little shit. If i was Chanyeol
i would have fallen head over heals, no kidding.

the baekchen ;;;; i have a weakness for it, i liked it ngl. I loved their dynamics actually. it was something between casual and....stormy? lol? kinda balancing between baekhyun being worried and trying to be indifferent? I probably
got that wrong, but that what it felt like to me and i loved it<3
i felt kind of sad on jongdae's behalf tbh. while reading the fic i thought that jongdae actually suited baekhyun better.
i know this is a chanbaek feast and all lmao but i was rooting for him. i think i kind of liked him better than chanyeol.
jongdae was so passionate- chanyeol seemed a bit lukewarm to me. Idk \:D/ i guess i could feel jongdae in a way
because i was in the same situation as him 4 years ago.

i really liked that in the end they met the others. everything came together and i like those kind of endings c:
thank you again for choosing my prompt.

[(Anonymous)]

it's so long but i felt like i was just reading chapter one of a novel. this had me crave for some kind of a sequel. thank you for writing this. <3

[lucifer-land.livejournal.com]

I really really enjoyed this a lot.
First of all, I really love fics where they have the powers - there seriously aren't enough good ones.
Secondly, it was well written and you defined the relationship borders nicely.
Thirdly, good god, that did not feel like 39k I was expecting to feel like I'd read so much more (not a bad thing btw :3)
Good job ^^

omdg mamapowers!au

[(Anonymous)]

It's been a while since last time I read mamapowers!au ♥

first of all, I love how chanbaek can get their fast-build relationship in fics without getting any >.> from a reader. because it feels so natural like they're friends today and bam they're lovers the next day and we're like "of course."

I knew there'll be slight soulmate!au when I started this fic because baekhyun said he wasnt into boyfriends thing but he feels like he's connected to chanyeol? AND I WAS RIGHT.

damn mamapowers + soulmate. my weakness.

The part when baekhyun became light is my fave part because I can imagine he shines so beautifully, though the light probably blinded me before I can even see his face lol baekhyun x light is forever ♥

At first I thought you'll make jongdae forever a third wheel :( I was mad when he snapped to baekhyun and chanyeol but at the same time I understand his feelings about baekhyun. and then minseok came and all things back to where it belongs lol the way they talk back at each other <3 I would like to read their story as side (puppy eyes)

and somehow I feel like this story need to have sequel :( I kinda want to see how their life turns out now that they all together? (puppy eyes #2)

but anyway, I have a good time reading this fic, thank you authornim! ♥


P.S: Please consider my wish about chenmin and sequel
P.P.S: It's not like I'm pushing you though
P.P.P.S: but please?

[greeent.livejournal.com]

its so hard to find mama!au fics these days and i'm glad you wrote one :) the plot was very interesting especially when baek did his thing. i guess that's my most fav part.

chenbaek!!!!!!!!!!!! ah i think it would be much better to write that as side pairing because i was pretty surprised haha. the situation was very awkward between them three but i'm glad it they're all okay in the end.

thank you for writing this :)

[(Anonymous)]

Before you begin to read this review just know that it has many SPOILERS! So it has definitely been a minute since I've written a nice long review of a fic. First of all I wanna state that I'm a mama!au fanatic, like everyone has been saying there's not enough mama!au fics that are actually decent out there & what you did with this fic involving their powers gave me goosebumps and that exciting feeling in my stomach again, I haven't read a really good fic in a while that has made me so excited to read it (if that makes any sense). Second of all, I love the baeksoo/baekyeol in the beginning, the comfort that Chen found in Baekhyun and him sort of confusing that love with being IN love is the perfect recipe for a slight tug in their friendship but they overcame it well, also another thing about that is I felt the fic was moving along very quickly but that's probably due to the fact that it's not supposed to be a chaptered fic- although like the other comments I would totally get on my knees and beg for you to make a sequel with this fic because this could turn into something big and lastly, you basically included most- if not all my ships in here, although I wish the kaisoo was more prominent I'm glad they were stated as a couple hehe that concludes my very long babble about this wonderful fic. Thank you for taking the time to write it! I'm looking forward to knowing who you are so I can check out your other work :)

[pcyzyx.livejournal.com]

thumbs up for this fic👍🏻 i love how their mama powers were described here also the sexy times is good *blushes* the ending made me want a sequel tho. good job authornim!

[owmichi.livejournal.com]

IM SO GLAD AT THE ENDING I DIDNT EXPECT THEY WOULD MEET THE OTHERS AT THE FOREST AND THEN THEY WERE WHOLE IM SO GLAD YOU THOUGHT ABOUT IT I NEVER SAW THAT COMING ;;;; THIS WAS WELL WRITTEN I WAS JUST DISTURBED ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN CHEN AND BAEKHYUN IM SORRY I COULDNT GET IT OFF MY HEAD HAHAHAHAHA I STARTED HATING ON HIM TOO ON A CERTAIN PART OF THIS FIC UGH MY EMOTIONS GOT ME SO MAD AT HIM HAHAHAHAHAHA BUT IM REALLY PROUD AND HAPPY CHANYEOL TOOK EVERYTHING SO WELL AND BAEKHYUN STOOD UP FOR HIS LOVE FOR CHANYEOL NO MATTER HOW SPECIAL CHEN IS FOR HIM... I MUST SAY I LOVED HOW THEY MET EEEEPPPP BAEKHYUN USING CD'S TO GET TO CHANYEOL HAHAHAHA THAT WAS CUTE

[cbfantasy.livejournal.com]

*whistles* all the rough sex got me exhausted! LOL! But super love the story! Got concerned a bit that Baekhyun won't make it in one piece but omg Yeol kept him in place. They are really destined to be with each other!