Snowflake

May. 12th, 2016 08:10 am
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Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt #: 181
Title: Snowflake
Word Counts: 18k+
Side Pairing(s): Kaisoo (minor)
Rating: M
Warning(s): tragedy
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this fictional work. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: History repeats itself. Baekhyun relives the same day knowing like the back of his hand how it begins and how it ends. It’s what he does in the middle that changes everything.
Author's Note: Thank you for this amazing prompt, I hope you enjoy this~

(Snowflake)

I AM YOUR PROMPTER! (I think... hahahaha)

Date: 2016-05-12 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amiyourprincess.livejournal.com
Dearest authornim, here follows everything I love in this fic: EVERYTHING.

I just love the part where it's so clear how their relationship is good and happy and it makes you want to be in that relationship. And this was suddenly an angel/devil!au and OOOHHHHHGGGGGOOODDDD I'M A REAL SUCKER FOR THAT!!!! I love you so so so much authornim!!! :''''')
The countdown made me anticipate the last I. And wow, how many bad things can happen to you in a day Park Chanyeol?? Someone wants you so dead so fast and so bad!
But oh my... why were there rats?? Hahahaha. I am most terrified of rats! HAHAHAHA.
Oh! oh!!! Why seven chances? Seven gates of hell?
Minseokkieeeeeeee. Whyyyyy. I'll probably give him my soul even without anything in return. I think. HAHAHAHA. WHAT DOES FREAKING SNOWFLAKE FREAKING WANT???? OH WAIT WHAT. It's minseok all along??? Oh noooooooooooooo!!! (My soul is still up for grabs tho. LOLJK.)
Kyungiiiiieieieieieiiiiieeeeeeeee. Cute little angel you are!!! No wonder you like smacking the hell outta Baek in real life. He never listens huh? HAHAHAA.

AND WOW THE FIGHT SCENE. Baekhyun turning weaking, Chanyeol feeding him, UGH!!!! Just the entirety of Chanyeol understanding that Baekhyun needs to do "something" and not asking anything else, giving him all his trust. WOW.

THE POWER OF LOVE.
THE FREAKING POWER OF FREAKING LOVE YOU MOTHERFATHER!!!!

BROKEN MINSOO WHAAAAAAT?? I'm not a shipper but OH WOW this hurt!!!!!
“I love Jongin, Minseok. I always did.”
I am seriously hurt!!!????? He passed the Angel's Embrace!!!! Oh dear Minseok!!!!
Minseok’s heart is broken. But so is Kyungsoo’s. Mine as well!!!!


I loved this authornim!!! From the first letter to the last punctuation. Thank you for turning my prompt to a very beautiful story. I wish you happiness authornim!!!
- M 💜💜💜

RE: I AM YOUR PROMPTER! (I think... hahahaha)

Date: 2016-05-12 09:42 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I agree with everything you've said!

Date: 2016-05-12 06:24 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
this was simply amazing
i love how the climax all led up to the end and how there were so many little complex stories and feelings hidden inside

Date: 2016-05-12 06:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rixxanna.livejournal.com
What amazing fic authornim!! I thought it was gonna end like if only the movie, but it was different and gold is the only word i can came up with this fic. Two thumbs up authornim!!!

Date: 2016-05-12 07:40 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I cried when reading this. I thought it's gonna be an angst fic but thank god for the happy ending \o/

Date: 2016-05-12 09:20 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
also i forgot to add to my previous comment
i thought about it before and i find it really sad how even tho it was a happy ending, baekhyun is still minseoks now and he'll never be able to spend forever with chanyeol
i find that really really sad
and how the symbol on his chest actually is marks him as minseoks
and he'll be minseoks forever, not chanyeol
XIUBAEK THO WOOHOO
but i think if i were to be caced with that reality, id be really scared :{

WOOW!

Date: 2016-05-12 09:37 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I love the weaving of your fantasy with mystery and tragedy and angst. The world that you crafted with the angels and the Devils was something refreshing to see. I liked how Baekhyun was slowly able to figure out the real situation and I also liked how minseok started off as a saviour and then plot twist turns into the actual villain of the story. Although Chanyeol was not shown much, the last day of the repeats showed a great deal of his personality and their relationship and it made me understand why baekhyun was so strong in wanting to save Chanyeol. This story is mind blowing to say the least. Keep writing!

Date: 2016-05-12 09:41 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This was good! Thank you for the ride, authornim ❤️

Date: 2016-05-12 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baeksilisk.livejournal.com
HELLO THIS IS AMAZING I'm here to tell you that I haven't cried over a fic for a long time. Earlier, I was just talking about how I'm waiting for a fic from this year's round of BAE that will make me cry again. I'm here because I've seen people recommend this, so I decided to check it out, AND IT'S THE BEST THING I'VE EVER DONE THIS WEEK, POSSIBLY THIS MONTH CAN I JUST CRY

Well, I already am. I've been ugly sobbing for a few hours now and I can't seem to do anything about it.

I wonder who you are IT'LL HAUNT ME FOR THE REST OF MY DAYS (until reveals, at least) and I can't wait to know who you are so I can cry some more. This was really beautiful, you write so beautifully, and I can't wait to read more from you :_____;;

Cheers, author-nim!

Date: 2016-05-12 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
BEST FIC I READ SO FAR <3
IM SO HAPPY THEY ENDED TOGETHER. THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. AAAH AND I HAD LEGIT GOOSEBUMPS WHEN IT WAS REVEALED THE SNOWFKAKE WAS MINSEOK.
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH AUTHORNIM. /throws kisses

Date: 2016-05-12 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
wow this was one hell of a ride. Wow your so awseome and this fic was just perfect. Im speechless. Tysm for writing <3 my new fave fic *_*

Date: 2016-05-12 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thetwistwithin.livejournal.com
What an excellent story! It was so good at making me frustrated, jfc, I just wanted to grab Baekhyun and shake some sense into him for not listening! But I loved it, I loved it because, as a reader, I could feel how much Baekhyun and Chanyeol loved each other; that isn't always easy. Kudos to you!

Date: 2016-05-12 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I cried. I like the action here and the love that Baekhyun has for Chanyeol. Thank u for this <3

Date: 2016-05-13 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frozen-miruku (from livejournal.com)
Okay I am still at the part after Baekhyun and Chanyeol in a taxi to airport and died, when suddenly it clicked and I have to type this. The noises when Baekhyun closed his eyes, was it his conscience, or ahh what do you call them, voices inside your heart? Anyway, when the voice tell him not to trust Minseok, I am almost sure Minseok is a devil here. A few months of reading kuroshitsuji fics and I know how deal with a devil work lol they make a deal in their favor. Minseok won't give up Baekhyun's soul so easily, so he had to make Baekhyun fail.

And the snowflakes everywhere. I haven't understand the mark on Baekhyun yet, but could it be that was the mark of their deal?
When Baekhyun searched Minseok to ask who snowflake was, I was like Nooo you're wrong bb!!!

Ahhh it was really sweet at the very first time, but my heart was beating wildly and I was tensed up after Chanyeol told Baek about all the weird things he experienced (;゚д゚) so scary man

And this part sobs For the first time, Baekhyun truly understands what making love means ahh I wanna cryyyy

Baekhyun is really smart, almost a step ahead of Minseok, by following Chanyeol to the office etc etc
So happy when Baek finally connected with Kyungsoo bc there's hope!!
And then when B came to the office with Chanyeol for his 'mission' I was like (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) bc Yeol just go along with it, not once telling him to stop or how silly it was ;A;
Few times I was frustrated at Chanyeol bc he was so persistent to show that something, which turned out to be a proposal oh yeahhh
Sigh I am so happy when Minseok let Baekhyun live. :) in the end Baekhyun win. Both of them live TTuTT
Ahhhh I have a great time reading this, thanks for whoever prompted this and thanks for writing!! This fic is simply amazing and perfect ❤❤❤

Date: 2016-05-13 03:03 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
idk where to start.

its painfully yet beautifully written. Read this fic last night and i just cant write a proper comment after reading (i dont think this one os proper enough but hey, I try lol) because my eyes full of tears (sad and happy).

I love how you write baekhyun's character in here. EVEN I CAN FEEL HIS LOVE TO CHANYEOL. Baekhyun's love saved the universe. his love saved chanyeol, saved himself and saved minseok.

I laughed at some part, like where chanyeol running with his helmet on, he must be look so stupid lmao and whole the clingy!baekhyun thing. eventhough it supposed to be serious and sad I cant help but laugh cos chanyeol stuck with him.

TO SUM UP, I LOVE EVERYTHING. I love the happy, sad, pain. Good job authornim you just give chanbaek fans another fic for them to put on top of their list (I already did).

Thank you for this amazing fic ❤

Date: 2016-05-13 04:36 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
WOW AUTHORNIM YOU ARE AMAZING, THIS FIC IS AMAZING. EVERYTHING IS AMAZING. I'M STILL A SOBBING MESS AFTER READING THIS STORY, IT JUST TUGS MY HEART SO MUCH AFTER REALIZING THAT MINSEOK WAS ONCE A SAD PERSON TOO. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. (´。• ᵕ •。`) ♡ (ㅠㅅㅠ)

Date: 2016-05-13 05:54 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
HI I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS FIC
THANK YO USO MUCH FOR POSTING <3

Date: 2016-05-13 09:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] for-you-i-am.livejournal.com
This was soooo gooooood omg! I felt so bad for minseok... it takes skill to write a good villain, but even more so to write a good sympathetic villain. I really liked his character by the end, which surprised me, and his and kyungsoo's reunion was heartbreaking. Baekhyun and Chanyeol's love had this beautiful innocence about it that was really touching... I fell in love with Chanyeol myself, seeing him through Baekhyun's eyes. Such a good story, thank you so much for writing xx

Date: 2016-05-14 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alitalitha.livejournal.com
I've never been really enjoyed reading fantasy but man CAN I SELL MY SOUL TO THIS FIC??! 😭😭😭
The way you use the story idea to portray how strong BaekYeol's love here is what makes me fall completely for this fic. And when Chanyeol decided to feed Baekhyun his own chew agjsdhjsdkfjdkddkk that's honestly gross but I LOVE IT SO DAMN MUCH LMAO. And when Baekhyun desperately wanted to save Chanyeol by making him tired from their bed activites, LOL Baek, you're hella genius. It's positive that I'm going to read this again in the near future and this' so going to be listed on my ficrec! FIVE STARS!

BLESS

Date: 2016-05-15 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] owmichi.livejournal.com
HOW COULD YOU PLAY WITH MY FEELINGS LIKE THIS OH MY GOD IM WEEPING ABFJWKXKDJWKFJA ONE OF THE BRIGHTEST FICS IVER READ EVER JESUS CHRIST I DIDNT KNOW SOMEONE HAS THE ABILITY TO PROMPT AND WRITE SOMETHING AS BLOODY GOOD AS THIS HANDS DOWN TO YOU MY SOUL IM GIVING YOU MY SOUL TAKE IT ITS URS FOREVERRRRRRR GDI IDEK WHERE TO START PERHAPS I CAN NEVER START SO IM JUST GONNA THANK U FOR WRITING THIS FOR DEVOTING UR TIME ON THIS MONSTROUS BEAUTY OF A FIC THANK YOU FOR UR HEART AND SOULI FELT IT THRU THE STORY THANK U FOR MAKING ME FEEL HOW GREATLY CHANBAEK'S LOVE IS THANK U FOR THE ENDING GOD THE ENDING IM A CRYING MESS I NEVER THOUGHT MINSEOK WOULD ACTUALLY GIVE CHANBAEK A CHANCE GOSH THIS IS REALLY GOOOOOD YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER HOW YOU DESCRIBED EVERYTHING THE EMOTIONS WERE ON POINT IT WENT STRAIGHT TO MY HEART I JUST CRY EVEN MORRREEEE UGH I LOVE YOU PLS ACCEPT ME IM YOURS

THE POWER OF LOVE THE FUCKING POWER OF LOVE OH MY GOD REALLY ALL THISE CHANCES MINSEOK GAVE TO BAEKHYUN EVEN I WAS DYING WITH HIM HOW DO U DEAL WITH SEEING THE MAN YOU LOVE THE MOST DIE IN UR ARMS EVERYDAY ITS JUST SO PAINFUL MAN I CANT IT HURTS SO MUCH EVEN AS THEY WERE MAKING LOVE NOOOOO I WAS CRYING I WAS SO EMOTIONAL LIKE FUCK I CAN ABSOLUTELY FEEL HOW BAEKHYUN WAS HOLDING ON GRASPING EVERY MOMENT HE CAN FEEL CHANYEOL'S WARMTH AGDJSKXMSJJFJAS THIS IS THE SWEETEST LOVE EVERRRRRR OH LORD AND THAT FEEDING THING WHO EVER EXPECTED THAT???? I THOUGHT BAEK WAS GONNA DIE OUT OF EXHAUSTION BUT NO HE KEPT ON FIGHTING AND THERES CHANYEOL FIGHTING WITH HIM FEEDING HIM THRU THEIR KISSES LIKE DAMNWHERE CAN WE FINS A LOVE LIKE THIS SHRIEKSSSSSS HWJDNKWMF

EPIC !!!

Date: 2016-05-16 05:58 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Woah this is daebak ! Just like what everyone's said is freaking AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love everytng about this, how baek is super in love with chanyeol he sacrificed his soul to the devil, and how much chanyeol loves baekhyun too with the guiding thingy. THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH IT HURTS ME TO SEE THEM APART ! Luckily deep down minsoekie is always a good guy, glad he lets baekhyun has his happy ending w/ chanyeol !

My eyes are raining

Date: 2016-05-16 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
First and foremost, thank you for writing such a beautiful fic. I can't express enough in words how lovely this fic is.

I was very hesitant to click to read this fic after i saw the warning clearly written 'tragedy', because afterall, hello ANGST. But I'm glad I did coz I love everything in this fic. I think my heart broke together with baekhyun in this fic. Haha. I can't imagine the overbearing pain everytime he woke up only to keep dreading and suffering. ( I cried and I hate you a little for that. Lol, jk)

When Chanyeol told baekhyun his lenghty list of near-suicide-moment, I was having cold shiver and goosebumps. It was damn scary. I almost kill minseok myself, because YEOL IS A GIANT PUPPY, HOW CAN YOU KILL HIM!!! @sncorbvx-/@hdor,!!!

But then again, you twist this story and give it a happy ending, and you should, considering you broke million hearts of baekyeol shipper reading this story. Lol. I don't know who you are authornim. But, whoever you are, kudos for writing such a great story :)

Date: 2016-05-16 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baekfired.livejournal.com
TISSUES. I NEED TISSUES NOW.

IT HAS BEEN A VERY LONG TIME SINCE I STUMBLED UPON A FIC THIS AMAZING I-

Too beautiful and painful at the same time. Chanyeol was so full of love, my fucking heart would break every single time he dies. What kind of sick psychopath would want to hurt such a giant ball of fluff?!?!?? And Baekhyun. He was so genuine, so lost and so poor I honestly just uGH. YOU ARE NOT DOING THIS TO ME YOU DO NOT PLAY WITH MY HEART LIKE THIS.

Also, the last scene. The one where Chanyeol finally, FINALLY shows Baekhyun the surprise- all hell broke loose (meaning I burst out crying). Man. This fic was that good. It had me all up in my feels. Thank you for putting so much effort into this and God bless.

Date: 2016-05-20 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] (from livejournal.com)
oh my god i just

Image

each day is beautifully written authornim! it really feels like im the one who is going to lose chanyeol ( ;∀;) snowflake pls dont hurt my smol baby ㅠ

and it really gets me on how they are just soooooo in love with each other. seeing baek struggling so much too keep his love alive is way too heartbreaking ;ㅅ;


now excuse me i need to take care of my poor little heart screaming over chanbaek

Date: 2016-06-01 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eterninitys.livejournal.com
Hello :)

I just had the chance to read this beautiful fic just now when everybody else has been crying over it for the nth time. Hngngnn. I just wanna thank you for creating this fic??? Thank you so much!

It’s painful, even though it’s the kind of pain I can handle. The idea of repeating the same day over and over again just to watch your lover die at the end of the day is such an interesting idea, thanks to whoever prompted this, and it hurts me to see how Baekhyun struggles real hard to figure out ways to save Chanyeol, but fails each time and almost loses his hope. T.T

How can Chanyeol be so innocent ;___; How can he not notice that someone is trying to kill him OTL. The moment he explains every weird thing that happened to him on his way to meet Baekhyun actually kills me, I just want to yell “SOMEONE IS TRYING TO KILL YOU HOW CAN YOU NOT REALIZE AND SAY IT’S NOTHING WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU” at him on behalf of Baekhyun. T_____T Luckily enough, Baekhyun notices it and I especially love the way you wrote this fic where every time Baekhyun sees someone try to kill Chanyeol, the sign of Snowflake is everywhere(?) Am I right? I’m not sure OTL I have to reread this again orz im such a forgetful person.

I was hoping that Minseok wasn’t the one who planned everything behind this, and I was taken aback to see that he really //is// the one planning all this, and it hurts me to know that he is actually trying to kill Chanyeol just because he wants Baekhyun’s soul to take with him. And omg, his greediness is evident when he reveals that he doesn’t mind what will happen to Chanbaek, because he knows in the end he will get Baekhyun’s soul no matter what happens :< I kinda hate Minseok in this, but then when Kyungsoo appears, everything is explained and starting from there, I started to feel Minseok more? I was a little bit confused first when I started reading the part where Kyungsoo appears, but then everything is explained in details and every question is answered, and I applaud you for that. :’D Loving someone who loves someone else really kills us, and I can understand why Minseok is doing all of these. I feel sorry that he has to face this but I’m glad Kyungsoo manages to stop him from hurting Baekhyun. ;_; His love for Kyungsoo is really beautiful :( THE POWER OF LOVE i almost died at the mention of THAAAAAAT.

It’s a beautiful story KDHSKDSDFKSFJ , really good enough to make my heart clench silently, and thank you so much for writing this, authornim T.T I hope to see more beautiful fics from you in the future!

Mind-blowing! Tear-jerking! Heart-wrenching!

Date: 2016-06-05 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cbfantasy.livejournal.com
I have nothing but good words and applause for this fic! As expected from my favorite author (and I'm not saying this because you are my favorite), you have managed to take your readers to an emotional rollercoaster ride. Half of the story I was feeling as angry, hopeless and as wrecked as Baekhyun. I wanted to save Chanyeol myself but just like our protagonist I can just sit and see how it painfully unfolds.

My heart goes to Minseok too. It just solidifies my belief that each one has a goodness in their heart—no matter how it have been smeared by pain. There's always that one percent of your whole being that will always tell you to do the right thing. He's probably my favorite character in this fic for he portrayed how love can ruin and recreate a person. For me, he represents growth, maturity.

This fic showed how boundless love is—even if it takes is your life. I am just amazed how one can sacrifice oneself for the one he loves. Coz if you think about it, it is not at all easy! Let me also recognize how Chanyeol's love reverberates. He was clueless. He was worried. But his trust never wavered.

Thank you for writing this. I am glad to have read this in this lifetime. Very inspiring! I love you authornim! My support goes out to al of your works. :)

Date: 2016-07-08 05:36 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This was very amazingly done! I'm very glad to have read this. It made me understand tans the meaning of love.

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