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Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt #: 53
Title:Voglia di equilibrio
Word Counts:14K
Side Pairing(s):None
Rating:PG-13
Warning(s): implied sex scene, not written
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this fictional work. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: In order to escape Seoul and his life, Baekhyun buys on impulse a ticket to Italy. He doesn’t know what to expect from a country he doesn’t know. He has to face the language barrier, his fears and the loneliness. Yet, on his first day, he meets Chanyeol, a busker playing the guitar in the streets of Rome, who soon becomes his tour guide. Baekhyun discovers Italy thanks to Chanyeol, but struggles to forget what happened in Seoul.
Author's Note: Thanks to the mods for being awesome. Thanks to J, S and C(even if you're not in this fandom), you've listened to me whine and have also helped a lot. OP, I fail at comedy, but at least you get to see Italy through Baekhyun and Chanyeol’s eyes. I hope you enjoy that. I was gonna make a playlist, but I couldn´t. The name’s taken from Estate by Negramaro, so I suggest listening to the full album while reading, Mentre Tutto Scorre

(Voglia di equilibrio)

Date: 2016-05-11 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] for-you-i-am.livejournal.com
This was fantastic. I haven't been to any of these places since I was a little girl, but I feel like I've really been to them all over again!! I'm guessing you're probably Italian, haha, or have at least spent a lot of time in Italy.

Your writing is so beautifully descriptive and the emotions all unfold so subtly, which I love. But my favourite part of this fic was the ending -- I always love a good open ending, and this one was perfect. Well done, dear author!

Date: 2016-06-04 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caterplina.livejournal.com
LET ME HUG YOUUU!! You're the first one that didn't call it a cliffhanger!
I prefered to end it this way :)

I have been to italy many times, i love the country and I wanted people to see it through baekyeol.
thank you for telling me about the emotions being subtle, I was worried that it might seem weird, or empty tbh.

thank you!

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