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BaeconAndEggs ([personal profile] baekyeolexchange) wrote2016-05-26 08:10 am

Swift, T. (2012, Track 4)

Author: ANONYMOUS
prompt #: 248
Title: Swift, T. (2012, Track 4)
Word Counts: 16,370
Side Pairing(s): none
Rating: pg
Warning(s): some sexual content
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this fictional work. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: alternatively I Knew You Were Trouble, if only Park Chanyeol knew that TayTay song when he first met Byun Baekhyun.
Author's Note: i’m deeply sorry to the mods, my beta, and everyone i’ve disappointed and disturbed in the making of this fic. I’m thankful you still put up with me, though. To the great person who sent this fantastic prompt: i’m so sorry, please forgive me for not doing it justice.

(Swift, T. (2012, Track 4))

[identity profile] baldybodhi.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
Unfortunately, TayTay track 4 wasn't the background music when I read this. I just can relate Baek irl must be that sassy. I knew it.
Bitter-sweet story, it just went with the flow and dumb Chanyeol with his appointment with cardio was ridiculous; he's really not good with human relationship. Thank God he's got a leather planner to save it.
Good job, author-nim. Love it.

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-04 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
ahaha thank god indeed for leather planners.

thanks for reading and commenting dear! ^^

[identity profile] kyungenie.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
I'm so blessed to read most of the fics in this exchange. There are so many wonderfull stories with different themes. Including yours, look like you own a restaurant based on the way you wrote this story or you just good with these! So descriptive and detail, easy and can't stop reading till the end.
Good job autornim. I hope you keep writing BaekYeol ~
Edited 2016-05-26 03:30 (UTC)

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-04 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
omg i feel the same way! bae writers outdid themselves!!

i actually know next to nothing about the restaurant industry so im glad it seemed that way to you lol

thank you for reading!

[identity profile] lionheartbaby.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 11:45 am (UTC)(link)
omggg this was so nice I swear to god, I'm so weak when it comes to them having different contrasting personalities ❤️_❤️ I love how sassy baekhyun is and how chanyeol can't control his emotions it's so cuteee, the story is also so nice written and it's such a good fic ;; this was very fun to read i love it

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-04 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
how can chanyeol control himself if /baekhyun/ ahaahah

thank you!

[identity profile] nikka14.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 12:20 pm (UTC)(link)
WHEN THE NEIGHBOR SAID BAEKHYUN HAS A SON MY HEART FELL!!! But it was a dog ok hahaha

WHEN CHANYEOL SAID BYE STAIRS I CRIED HUHUHU BECAUSE WHYYYY NOOOO

AND THE LAST PART THEY WERE TOGETHER AND BAEKHYUN IS STUDYING HUHUHU

YAAAAAY I love it!!! (obviously hahaha)

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-04 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
WE H WEH WEH

[identity profile] piemin.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
"I AM SO IN LIKE WITH HIM."
honestly can this story get any cuter? even though it was kinda quick of bh to forgive cy BUT WHATEVER i live for the fluff and this is so perfect.
thank you for your time spent on this story ❤️

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-04 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
i live for cb fluff too lol

thanks!! 😍

[identity profile] quidditchsnitch.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
People can quote all the deepshit lines they read in a book, but I'm going to quote the cutest line that stuck and branded this fic in my head, "I'm so in like with him."

And I'm so in like with this fic!
Although wish it would've been a bit longer and the drama part is a bit stretched and detailed (Yes, I love drama. Yes to crying.), but it's alright because there's good amount of fluff, usually chanyeol talking to and arguing with himself about how he's in like with baekhyun and how baekhyun is his. And there's possessive chanyeol, jealous chanyeol, sassy baekhyun, i-have-fallen-for-my-cold-hearted-boss baekhyun and lots of chanyeol and baekhyun i love in a fic.

Remind me to steal chanyeol's planner and see which cardio doctor he's seeing. I want to have an appointment, too, thanks to this lovely fic and its amazing author!

PS. I cried when I read the summary. Chanyeol calls T. Swift "TayTay". I'm gone.

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
awww yeah i wouldve wanted this to be a bit longer too (w the drama lol) but irk foes get in the way of writing so i can only come up w this dumb thing lol

i love possessive and jealous yeol you cant imagine hahabajaa

thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

[identity profile] southofkang.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)

I love love love this fic!! Ahhh!! I can almost taste the tension betweem them ♡♡♡ I really enjoyed reading this and Chanyeol is soo cute *hearts eyes*

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
thankeuuuuuuuuuuu heart heart heart

[identity profile] noonaofdarkness.livejournal.com 2016-05-26 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Such a nice, sweet read without any unnecessary drama. And the drama that was there was just the right amount to keep it interesting and bring them back together. I liked the building tension and clueless chanyeol is always a favorite. I also love that everyone else knew baekhyun liked chanyeol except for chanyeol. And then baekhyun pouring all his feelings out when they fought ;u;;

But all is well and yay for shared custody of a puppy.

This was very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
i love writing dumb!chanyeol im sorry ;;

im glad you liked this and my i say i really love your fic too!!!

thanks so much!

[identity profile] wintersoeul19.livejournal.com 2016-05-27 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
i cried. i freakin' cried. please take my heart and my soul and my everything! ugh, i'm so in like with this fic ㅠㅠ

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
awwww /hugsssss

but this is fluff why do you cry ahhahaha jk

[identity profile] pastasushi.livejournal.com 2016-05-27 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
I think I know who write this, cause I'm very in like with this story<3
So cute really! I like their tension, and I'm very much inspired with the stairs thing. I think I'm gonna test my future bf with the goddamn stairs too!

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
DID YOU REALLY??

HAHAH love you bb thank you!

(Anonymous) 2016-05-27 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
This is sooo my kind of story.. thanks a lottt!!

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
awww thanks!!

[identity profile] wek9876.livejournal.com 2016-05-27 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
im soooooo lucky that i read this story. the character is perfectly fine with both of them. Minseok knows everything. you cant hide anything from him ;)

[identity profile] vavole.livejournal.com 2016-05-27 08:57 am (UTC)(link)
This is my kind of story, so nice and well written. A clash of personalities, sassy Byun Baek and Chanyeol with his cardiologist appointment lol

I’m really in like with you.
Aaaaaaaaaaah *-*

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
i need to know cy's cardio specialist too tbh ahhaha

thanks so much!! ^^

[identity profile] mericur.livejournal.com 2016-05-27 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Hands down. I think I got a favorite already. I might give this a second or third or so reading because it's just /that/ great. I love how both these idiots were trying to hold back(?) their feelings for each other. One scene that particularly made me cry was when Chanyeol gave Baekhyun his planner ;;;; that broke my heart to bits ;;;; he was being a drama queen and even got down using the stairs because he was dramatic and broken hearted like that ASKDKDKDLDLDLKD thank you really for writing this. It's already 2am here but I knew I had to post this comment to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this. Good job! ♥︎
Edited 2016-05-28 09:59 (UTC)

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
oh my, that's a really big compliment (and you've probably changed your mind at this point) but im happy that at one point it became your fave 😂

cy giving baek his planner was one of my fave scenes too bc i think its just fitting to show that piece of himself to baekhyun after baek told his insecurities to pcy during their make out scene (lol)

im really glad you liked my fic thank you so much!!

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[identity profile] mericur.livejournal.com - 2016-06-06 19:45 (UTC) - Expand

[identity profile] nighttimefalls.livejournal.com 2016-05-28 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
I am extremely bad at giving comments even on the stories I really like but ok, this has the right kind of chanbaek "feel" I've always loved about chanbaek fics. I don't think I can stress enough how I love your writing since day 1 but aaaaaah you always deliver and you deliver well, you never disappoint. This fandom is blessed to have a writer like you.

Thank you so much for this! 💕

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
awww lia. thanks youve always been very supportive. im so grateful for our friendship (almost 4 years ive known you!!)

(Anonymous) 2016-05-28 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
THIS WAS SO AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL AND WONDERFUL AND ALL THE GOOD THINGS!!!!! even my dry eyes were suddeny tearing up at one point T^T thanks for healing my eyes author-nim. and healing my heart thats been numb with chanbaek goodness!!!

Thank you for this!!! and if i find out my fave author wrote this (which i have a feeling is) im going to flip and fall in love more hehe


Thank you for writing baekyeol ❤️❤️❤️

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
did you think ot was me ahaha

if not im sorry to disappoint but im gladd you liked this.

thank you bb!

<3 M

(Anonymous) 2016-05-28 05:18 am (UTC)(link)
Omg I can't even express how much I loved this. I was so happy the drama was cut short (I'm a sucker for fluff. Really.) because my heart couldn't handle anymore of their separation. This was just so nice it hurts. Definitely a good read that I would recommend to anyone!

<3 M

RE: <3 M

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
aww im a sucker for fluff toi and all the nice things ehheeh

thanks alot!! ^^

[identity profile] bbh my love (from livejournal.com) 2016-05-28 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I love love love this fluff so much! Perfect mix of tension, drama, comedy and cute! I'm so in like with them!! ❤️❤️

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
thank you so so so much!!

[identity profile] rixxanna.livejournal.com 2016-05-28 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
CUTEEEE is all i can say, i enjoyed the flow... How you pave the story with cafe au (which js my favorite) i love the inside of chanyeol's journal and whatever he's doing in confusion lol. And hey he was that serious!! He used the stairs!! So the thing tho, is baekhyun still working on viva polo or move to chanyeol's future cafe? :p


I enjoyed a lot your fic authornim!! Good job!!!!!

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
ah in the end it was mentioned baek is still working part time for viva polo.. as to what happenes next.. im not sure lol

perhaps pcy could persuade him to jump fences 😋😋😂😂 who knows?

thanks for the comment bb!

[identity profile] greeent.livejournal.com 2016-05-28 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
oh my gosh i'm so excited and so giddy right now because this is my first time i'm ever this sure about who the author isss. you may not realize it but you gave away hints here and there ♡___♡ not saying its bad, its actually the opposite because now i cant seem to stop smiling so much lol OTL

i think i'm in like with this story so muchhh. it's simple yet it's so chanbaek. (can chanbaek please be an adjective because i think i use it way too much for describing something otl

i found the last part extremely adorable and dorky when baekhyun was trying to find chanyeol when chanyeol had actually been running after him hahaha ;; adorable muffins.

thank you for writing this!!! have a nice day x

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
really really really ahahaha

chanbaek can be an adjective and it can mean : the most wonderful, amazingestesest, fluffiest, most perfectectectcet lol

thank you so much and i hope you have a nice day toooooo

[identity profile] owmichi.livejournal.com 2016-05-28 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
THIS HAS A VERY NICE PLOT VERY WELL EXECUTED VERY WELL WRITTEN I FELL IN LOVE WITH THE SASSY BAEK TOO AND THE EVER CONFUSED AND DUMB CHANYEOL ASJCJKSKDHSJAJS IT WAS SO GOOD AND FUN READING THIS I CANT COUNT HOW MANY TIMES I SQUEALED BC CHANYEOL'S JUST TOO CUTEEEEEE. I LOVED HIS PLANNER/JOURNAL ENTRIES ESP WHEN HE STARTED WRITING ABOUT BAEKHYUN KYAAAAHHH I LOVED THOSE PERIODS OF JEALOUSY AND CONFUSIONS ABOUT HIS FEELINGS THEN IT ALL ENDED UP WITH HIM SHUTTING BAEKHYUN'S LIPS WITH HISSSSSSS AAAHHHHH I COULDNT BE ANYMORE HAPPY. I DK WHY YOU FEEL THIS FIC ISNT GOOD ENOUGH WHEN ITS SO BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL. AND OMG HAVE I TOLD YOU HOW I LOVED MAMA PARK AND MINSEOK'S ROLE IN THIS FIC LIKE KYAAAHHH I LOVE THEIR LINES GOD I LOVE EVERYTHING IN THIS FIC YOU HAVE NO IDEAAAAAAA I WANTED TO TURN THIS INTO A MOVIE BC SHDJSKDKDHWJS IT REMINDED ME OF COFFEE PRINCE. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITNG THIS FOR JOINING THIS EXCHANGE FOR MAKING OUR HEARTS HAPPY WITH THIS SIMPLE YET PRECIOUS GEM

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
ahaaha michi idek what to say. just scream at me in person lol thank you!

[identity profile] sashia wira (from livejournal.com) 2016-05-29 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Ahhhhh this is so good ! I constantly having goosebumps while reading this! I love loveee loveee this 😍😍😍

Chanbaek relationship is so freaking cute!!! And their son ughhh how adorable !!! Totally an A+ story !

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
chanbaek is always always always cute thank you huhu ;A;

[identity profile] clio323.livejournal.com 2016-05-29 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
“Does it only have to be me? Can we not both win?”

^ my absolute favorite line. It is so satisfying because, on so many levels, chanyeol and baekhyun were at odds throughout the whole story, and in the moment they truly come together, there's no more fighting, no more losers, just the both of them, together, victorious. ///sighs/// thank you for such a delightful read!

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
omg.. you dont know kust how much ive spazzed when i saw you commented on my fic... im a fan huhu i really love your cb fics.. i tatooed the fixer upper series at the back of my eyelids TuT

so i was half so happy and half feeling embarrassed when i saw you read my thing idek what to do lol

but thank you so much for your comment. imma frame this now.

[identity profile] gilica.livejournal.com 2016-05-29 08:23 am (UTC)(link)
I missed reading this kind of fic!!! I think my heart's going to explode with feels!!! I'm so in like with this i wanna cry! I feel so blessed shipping chanbaek to be able read this fic like seriously!

[identity profile] kei17.livejournal.com 2016-06-05 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
i feel blessed shipping cb too they are the best huhu

thanks dear!!

(Anonymous) 2016-05-29 09:59 am (UTC)(link)
ok this fic is awesome. i loved the tension between chanbaek and the little misunderstanding that happened (cries) but glad they made up and lived happily ever after <3 this was beautifully written <3

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